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Friday, July 27, 2012

Excerpt: Chapter One from DEFYING GRAVITY

First off, we have a winner of the complete Gravity trilogy. Using Random.org, it gave me the #8. I counted down eight comments, and we have our winner:


Congratulations, Esther! I'll send you an email soon with the coupon codes for the trilogy. And if you didn't win, several bloggers are still hosting the giveaway, so be sure to enter. For a list of participating bloggers, click here.

Sorry, folks, no #fridayflash for a few weeks. Instead, I'm revealing excerpts from Defying Gravity, Fighting Gravity, and Pull of Gravity. So, here is Chapter One of Defying Gravity.

 

CHAPTER ONE


It’s only a year.

Linia stepped upon the silver staircase leading to the SS Perseid. Her moment to shine was finally here. After her years of linguistic studies and weeks of private training, she was the youngest crewmember to board this mission to brave new worlds and greet intelligent life on neighboring planets.

Three Persean crewmen stood ahead of her. Vines twisted in her peripheral vision, nearly encroaching upon the launch pad. How could she leave her verdant planet for a sea of stars? But this spacecraft held her future. She shifted from foot to foot, anxious for her turn to enter.

“Saying good-bye to your mommy and daddy, Linia?” An all-too-familiar tenor voice taunted her.

“Griffon?”

At three years her senior, she thought she’d left him behind in secondary school. Her head cocked to the side as she glared into his weak yellow eyes. She ignored his fine cheek bones and pure cerulean flesh. So what if he was a fine Persean specimen to every other female? He was a trorc’s ass. She moved closer to the entrance. “What are you doing here?”

Leaning against the railing, he chuckled and eyed her up and down. “It looks like we’re going to spend a year together in very close quarters. I’m the tenth crewmember.”

Her jaw dropped and antennae drooped. “You’re kidding me.”

“Nope.” He nudged her bag. “It’s your turn.”

Her mouth opened a couple of times, but no words would form. In the distance, she spied her parents. Dad wrapped an arm around Mom’s shoulders. Mom’s wheat blond hair, so like Linia’s own, waved in the gentle breeze. Linia’s throat tightened as they waved to her, but she couldn’t bear to return the gesture. Why didn’t anyone else’s family show up? Her embarrassment singed her cheeks and even made her antennae burn. She’d thought there would be more fanfare for their important departure. Instead, she probably looked like a child to the rest of the crew.

Turning away, she stared at the spacecraft. An entire solar year with Griffon on board. Her body slumped at the prospect, and her leaden feet clomped up the remaining stairs. If she didn’t want this position so much, she would’ve turned around and forgotten the entire mission. With a dry mouth, she said, “Linia, linguist,” to the Persean with the clipboard.

“Head to your right. Mixi’ll be waiting for you.” The woman turned toward Griffon. “Your name and occupation?”

“Griffon, engineer.”

Linia gasped and stumbled through the entryway. How did that arrogant jerk get an engineer position?

Stark white walls lined the interior of the spacecraft. The light hurt her sensitive eyes, and she blinked to adjust her vision. A sterilized scent, like cleaning fluids, caused her nose to wrinkle. She turned down another smaller hallway. If two people could pass each other without brushing shoulders, it would surprise her.

“You’re the linguist?” An older woman’s sharp voice echoed along the corridor.

“Yes, ma’am.” She couldn’t place Mixi’s age, since her white-blond hair was pulled back in a bun so tight it gave her a face lift. A small silver triangle sparkled upon her crisp dark blue uniform. So Mixi was a third of the head crew’s triumvirate, consisting of Captain Bous and Corporal Kavin.

“You will address me as Lieutenant Mixi.” She placed her palm upon a panel, and the door vanished into the wall. The room contained a small tube-like bed no bigger than a coffin and a closet barely big enough for her bag.

“These are your quarters. I suggest you dress quickly and meet me outside.” The lieutenant thrust a SS Perseid standard uniform at Linia. Mixi left with a snap of her heels.

The door closed Linia into the small room. Good thing she wasn’t claustrophobic, right? She gulped and ran her fingers over the golden swirl upon her uniform. She was the bridge between the Perseans and aliens, their one link to communication. A surge of pride and authority roared through her while she dressed in the uniform. The dark blue blended well with her lighter complexion. She pulled back her hair from her face and tied it in a ponytail before checking her appearance in a compact mirror.

“Linguist Linia, any day now,” Mixi called in her crisp voice.

Linia snapped the mirror shut and dropped it in her bag. Was she delaying the ship’s departure? She scurried out the room and nearly bumped into the lieutenant. Mixi glared at Linia, and she shuddered. Without another word, Mixi marched down the corridors.

Linia jogged to keep up with the lieutenant’s long strides. Her gaze sought the Perseid’s interior, but the same sterilized walls enclosed her. Each hall was nearly identical. How would she find her way around?

Mixi halted and placed her palm on another panel. The door slid open, and they entered the control center of the SS Perseid.

Eight Perseans sat at a metallic, semi-round table in the center of the room. Ten silver chairs, bolted to the floor, had seatbelts along the waist and over the shoulders. A window panel spread along the front wall. Slight raised edges appeared on the other walls, and Linia assumed they led to various instruments and cabinets.

Mixi motioned for Linia to take the vacant chair at the end of the table before the lieutenant stormed to the captain’s right.

With some reluctance, Linia lowered herself into the chair beside Griffon. He gave her a diabolical grin, and she ignored him, or tried to. Her gaze focused on the large viewing screen. A mixture of emeralds, crimsons, and purples bloomed before them. She breathed in, already missing Persea’s warm floral air. This would be her last glimpse of the planet before they lifted off into space.

“Welcome, everyone. We have quite an adventure before us, don’t we?” Several chuckled and nodded, but Linia’s lips pursed into a line. She thought she’d be sick.  “As you know, I’m Captain Bous.” The captain rested his hands across his bugling belly. The bright lights glistened off his perspiring forehead while he introduced the crew and their positions. “Buckle your seatbelts. Let’s fly.”

The seatbelts clicked into place, and her heart rate increased as the countdown began. Tingles, like lying down in a bed of prickly grass, coursed through her body. Her hand fluttered to her neck as she traced the smooth sapphire stone of her choker, the same one all Perseans wore.

A flurry of activity surrounded her. The captain placed his hand upon the table, and the flight instruments shifted into place. Several other Perseans did the same. She felt left out. A linguist’s skills would only be necessary when they met other intelligent life. Until then, she was no one, and the thought sank home. Her chest strained against the restraints.

What was she doing here?

A deep rumbling sound rose like a furious draken. The ship trembled as if in anticipation for the journey.

“Countdown. Three, two—”

She needed off this ship. She couldn’t be gone an entire solar year with these people.

“One.”

The SS Perseid rocketed into the air.

Next Friday, we'll meet Alezandros in Chapter Two of Defying Gravity.

Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Wednesday's Writing Update: A winner, a new kitten, an award, and more!

 

Happy Wednesday!

A lot has gone on lately, so I hope I don't forget anything.

First things first, the winner of Rachelle Ayala's Michal's Window is:


Congrats, Christine! I'll contact you shortly to see what e-format you want Michal's Window in.

The Sunday before last, we went to my co-worker's sister's house and picked up my sister's new kitten. She's an adorable gray ball of fluff we named Juliette, or Jules, and is around six weeks old. I tried taking a good picture of her, but she's in that run-and-play stage.

Thank you to everyone who has downloaded a copy of A to Z Flashes of Foxwick at Amazon. My little flash fiction collection has kept great company, even being beside Tolkien's Lord of the Rings at one point.

 

I'm still editing, proofreading, and formatting Women of Foxwick. I hope to upload it on Amazon, Smashwords, and Nook on Friday to make certain it's ready for the release date of Tuesday, June 26th.

I've also started writing Pull of Gravity, the third and last book in the Gravity trilogy. I'm really enjoying writing it so far, and I believe it'll be longer than the first two (around 20,000 than 15,000 words).

Also, Medeia Sharif and Precy Larkins awarded me The Booker Award last week. Thank you, Medeia and Precy!

 

This award is for book bloggers only. To receive this award the blog must be at least 50% about books (reading or writing is okay).

Along with receiving this award, you must also share your top five favorite books you have ever read. (More than five is okay.) You must give this award to 5-10 other lucky book blogs you adore.

Here are my five favorite books (aka mainly series). I have more, but these are the first five that popped into my head.

1. Harry Potter series by JK Rowling
2. Across the Universe series by Beth Revis
3. Become by Ali Cross
4. The Picture of Dorian Gray by Oscar Wilde
5. Jurassic Park by Michael Crichton

Now, I'm supposed to award 5-10 bloggers for this award, but I'm so bad at choosing people, so if you tell me your favorite book in the comments, then you can have the award too.

Before I forget, I also updated my author website and my self-publishing company's website.

Well, I'm back to writing and editing. What have you been up to?

Thursday, May 31, 2012

Blogversary Winner

Thank you, everyone, for commenting and those of you who signed up for my author newsletter during my 3rd Blogversary.

The winner of a $10 gift card from Amazon is:


I'll contact you shortly to send you the prize.

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Wednesday's Writing Update


Oh, where to begin with my Wednesday's Writing Update?

For starters, I finished the first draft of Missing on Sunday, November 28th. It came in at 51,669 words. You can read more about it here. And, the last installment of the flash fiction related to Missing can be read here. By finishing this first draft, I now have three completed first drafts of novels in two years.

I received an acceptance from Abandoned Towers for "Soul Survivor." It'll be for their online edition. I wrote "Soul Survivor" in 2005, and it was the first short story I've ever written. Since then, it's gone through different revisions, including a complete rewrite in January 2010 at the request of the Abandoned Towers' staff. I'm so pleased it was accepted, and I'll let everyone know when it is up and they can read it.

Back in October, I entered Hannah Kincade's Halloween contest. I didn't win, but she put up all the entries on her blog. You can read "Shadow" here. By the way, there are some other great entries she put up during November, so if you have a spare moment, be sure to read them. As a side note, "Shadow" was inspired by a dream I had.

Now, since it is December 1st, here is November's stats.
Submissions: 0
Rejections: 0
Acceptances: 1 ("Soul Survivor")
Word Count: 52,335 words
Submissions Still Out There: 1

Of course, my NaNoWriMo novel took up the majority of the word count for November. *winks*

Now, on to December's goals, and I have quite a few of them. There are five Fridays in December, so I decided to divide the items in the song "The Twelve Days of Christmas." Then, I'm writing in one or more items into a flash fiction piece for each Friday throughout the month. The first one is already written, so look for it on Friday. I hope to write the other four this week and set them to go up on their respective Fridays.

Also, for Raven and the Writing Desk, our theme is Christmas elves. I'll be writing my short story next week and the first part of our three-part story next week too.

Aubrie Dionne mentioned to me about a very awesome pirate anthology from Wicked East Press. I have a neat idea for it, so I hope to write it either next week or the next.

Then, I need to write my Fangtales entry after that.

And, probably most of all, I plan to do my research, character sketches, new blurbs, outline, a synopsis, and world building exercises for Virtuoso. Starting in January, I'll be rewriting the entire novel to some extent from scratch.

So even though I wrote an entire first draft of a novel last month, I plan to do quite a bit of writing this month too (although not as much in word count!). I'm really looking forward to beginning new projects and working on some old ones.

I still can't believe it is December already, though! Seriously, where did the time go?




Tuesday, November 30, 2010

NaNoWriMo: 30 Days + 50,000 words = Winner!


Last weekend, I was a little more than 10,000 words away from reaching the 50,000 word goal for NaNoWriMo. I buckled down and typed over 10,000 words in two days. It was the most I've ever written in such a short amount of time, and I'm surprised I feel so good about it still.

So, on November 28th, I finished the first draft of MISSING. It came in at 51,669 words.

I've learned a lot about myself as a writer by doing NaNoWriMo. For one, I am a plotter. I need my blurbs, outline, synopsis, character sketches, world building, and research ready for me to use before I write a single word in the actual novel. It was so easy to go down the line and write a scene. If I needed to look up what was in Sarah and Ted's apartment, I opened up my world building file and found what I needed. It cut down on thinking time and allowed me to write. For two, to some extent, I need to forget about writing rules when I write. For the most part, I write rather cleanly when it comes to grammar/spelling. The mistakes that are there are often typos, brain freezes, and other slips that come from a word-tired brain. I allow my characters to "look" or "be" or use that cliche. I know I'll fix all those in the next draft, but for now, I had to get the story out. If I don't allow myself that when I write a first draft of a novel, then I'll be stuck on chapter three forever. For three, when a new idea pops up while writing or the feeling of these characters, the plot, etc. changes, then I must go with it. True, the general plot didn't change, but more was added as I went or noted down to add in the second draft. Even the title of the novel changed mid-way through from SARAH'S NIGHTMARE to MISSING. For four, I must not despair that the novel wasn't as long as I hoped. I can add more and bulk it up in revisions.

MISSING has a lot of work that needs to be done before it is anywhere near polished. Soon, I plan to read through it and make notes on what I want to add and where. The rather crappy first draft is with my three critique partners (I love you, guys!), and I'm hoping for a general overview on the novel when they get a chance to read it.

For now, the novel will be put away, and besides the quick read-through, I likely won't get back to working on it until towards the end of next year or early 2012, since I need to revise/edit/polish my two previously completed first drafts of VIRTUOSO and THE PHOENIX PROPHETESS.

Overall, I say NaNoWriMo 2010 was a success. I have a brand new first draft of a novel that I'll get to play with and tweak and perfect in days to come.

Best of all, I have an idea for NaNoWriMo 2011. *grins*

Monday, August 16, 2010

And the winner is....


Congratulations, Tessa! My sister picked your name out of the box as the winner of my "First Page Critique Contest." 

If you didn't win, don't worry. Although Tessa will be receiving my only signed and printed copy of Once Upon a December Nightmare, it doesn't mean I won't be giving away an ebook copy soon.

Also, the winning excerpt was number three. That excerpt is the first page of my wip novel, Moonlight Murders. I will read through it a few more times, change it to their formatting, and send it to the James River Writers Conference for a first page critique. The three excerpts will be removed from the blog, as well. 

You can pre-order Once Upon a December Nightmare here. And, it is being featured on Dee Julian's Blurb Party this week here. Please go and leave a comment. Dee works hard to help promote authors' works.

So thank you again to everyone who entered!

Thursday, November 19, 2009

NaNoWriMo Day 19: Winner!

Yesterday, NaNoWriMo Day 18, I finished writing chapter seventeen, which is actually the eighteenth chapter of the book (prologue + 17 chapters). At this exciting moment of finishing chapter seventeen, something else happened. My novel ended up being 50,061 words last night. That's right, folks! I took the NaNoWriMo challenge to write 50,000 words of a novel in one month (November), and I completed the challenge. I'm so excited about winning. It's my first attempt at NaNoWriMo. With work and all, I never thought I would be able to get to the 50,000, especially in only 18 days.

A year ago, I would have never believed that I would have one novel finished. In September 2009, I finished writing the first draft to THE PHOENIX PROPHETESS. Six months ago, I would have said that sure, I might can finish a novel, but I'll never be able to write one in a month. Now, I am just seven chapters away from finishing my NaNo novel VIRTUOSO in one month. I am completely amazed by it, and I don't think there is any looking back either. Now that I know I can do it, there doesn't seem to be much stopping me.

Of course, I've realized that I have a hard time summing up a story in just one book. Yssa's story in THE PHOENIX PROPHETESS must be told in a trilogy (PROPHETESS, SORCERESS, QUEEN). VIRTUOSO couldn't even manage to be a single book all its own. My NaNo novel has been branched off into the Riverwood Trilogy: VIRTUOSO (Nadia's story), DOCTOR (Derek's story), and PERCUSSIONIST (Marcus's story). Of the Riverwood Trilogy, each book will continue the story from a different character's point of view. The only book that comes close to being completely on its own is MOONLIGHT MURDERS, but the Liam O'Hare detective novel could turn into a series of its own. But, the main thing is that I know I can do it because I've done it before.

My goal for the rest of November is to finish up the last seven chapters of VIRTUOSO. I would like to have them finished on Sunday, November 22 before my week's vacation, but we'll have to see. I do plan to have it finished at least by November 25, right before Thanksgiving. I figure with seven chapters left that I will have at least 15,000-30,000 more words to write before the end of the month, making the novel between 65,000-80,000 words, which will be a great chunk of words that I can go back to and do my rewrites/edits in the months to come.

On a side note, I sent out "Hounded" again, but it was rejected. The editor stated that the story was too 'cutesy' for his taste. *shrugs* I didn't know murder and abductions could be "cutesy" but oh, well. I have more short stories to send out after this month ends and even more to write.

Also, keep watching my blog, website, and general updates for more information about my writing. "Io Saturnalia" will be out in a couple weeks, and I'll give more details then for how to purchase the story.