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Monday, November 19, 2012

Special Excerpt: "Mage Game" from Women of Foxwick

Today I have a special excerpt of "Mage Game" from Women of Foxwick. This will be my last post until next Monday where I have a special visit from Aubrie Dionne about her YA Science Fiction Romance novel, Colonization. I hope everyone has a great Thanksgiving, or just a fantastic week, if you aren't in the US.

If you missed the previous excerpts for Women of Foxwick, you can click here for "Lady Bard," here for "Dragon Seer," and here for "Lady Death."

 

Mage Game

Bodies pressed and shifted around Amelia. Sweat’s sour scent permeated the air, and she wrinkled her nose. While she peered over the crowd to the raised stage, she yanked her limp hair into a bun. She didn’t see any sign of King Brum yet, but she did spy her twin sister Adetta, weaving through the throng of people.

“Where have you been, Det?” Amelia fanned herself.

“Checking out this year’s possible competition. I recognized a few from previous years.” Det bounced on her toes. A sword clanked behind her with each move.

“I don’t know why they’d come back.” Amelia’s gaze narrowed. “Whose sword did you steal this time?”

“Kar—” Det coughed. “Um, the blacksmith’s, but he gave it to me.”

Amelia lifted an eyebrow.

A trumpet blared, and the people drifted into silence.

King Brum stepped upon the stage. His golden crown gleamed in the late morning light.

“Citizens of Foxwick and neighboring friends, I welcome you to the Mage Game. Four boxes, one pair of names from each kingdom, a master of swords and a master of magic, will have the opportunity to win 10,000 gold coins. Shall I pick our contestants?”

The crowd roared its approval.

“Promise you won’t be mad,” Det whispered into Amelia’s ear.

“What did you do this time?”

On stage, the king reached into a box and pulled out a slip of paper.

“Promise me first.”

Amelia resisted the urge to roll her eyes. Det’s insistence grated on her nerves. Again.

“Our contestants from Wintermill are Swordsman Valance Sharp and Sorceress Belinda.” King Brum’s voice boomed over the crowd as a tall, muscular man walked on stage followed by a beautiful woman whose dark hair shimmered in the heat.

How does she get her hair like that?

Det bumped Amelia out of her thoughts.

“Mel, pay attention. Promise me.”

“Sure, sure. I promise.”

“I signedusup.” The words rushed in a lump that made Amelia blink.

“What?” Amelia turned toward her sister.

“Our second group from Valdale is . . .”

Det’s shoulders dropped. “I signed us up for the competition.”

“. . . Swordsman Tyre Goodmaker and Sorcerer Thay Goodmaker.”

“You what!” Amelia’s voice screeched, and several people shushed her. She ignored them. “Adetta, what have you done?”

“There’s no guarantee we’ll get in, but we could use the money.” Det gave her crooked smile and begging gaze.

Amelia looked away from her sister. A woman bumped her, but she barely felt it. What had Det gotten her into? She didn’t want to be sucked into her sister’s schemes again. It was bad enough Amelia still found burnt jelly to clean when Det decided to sell jams.

“Our contestants from Lochhollow are Sorcerer Nold Kant and Swordsman Eri Hilde.”

Two men joined the others on stage, but Amelia had a hard time focusing on them. Anger and fear boiled within her, and she trembled from the raging emotions. If the king called their names, they would have to withdraw. They couldn’t complete against these real sorcerers and swordsmen.

“Det, I’m an herb witch, and you don’t even know how to use a sword.”

“I do too, but come on. We need this.”

“People died last year in the competition. We can’t do this.” A shudder raced up Amelia’s spine.

“And now I call upon our contestants from our very own Foxwick . . . Swordswoman Adetta Crestwood and Sorceress Amelia Crestwood.”

Amelia heard the king’s voice, but she couldn’t respond. A thin line spread through the crowd. When her sister pushed her from behind, she stumbled forward. The stage drew closer. Why couldn’t she stop her forward momentum? Her mouth went dry, as if she’d swallowed cinnamon.

“We can’t do this, Det. We can’t.”

“It’ll be fun. Don’t be such a worrywart.”

Amelia clomped up the stairs and stood on the stage. So many people stared at them while the other contestants sneered. Her breath stuck in her throat.

“Here are our contestants.”

A smattering of applause rose from the crowd. Most people craned their heads to compare the competition. The gambling had already started as money changed hands.

“You have one hour to prepare. You must collect three items:  a dragon’s scale, a phoenix feather, and a unicorn’s hair. After you collect an item, you’ll bring it to a designated checkpoint. The last person to arrive at each checkpoint will be eliminated from the competition. Magical transportation will be used between the tasks. Here are your maps. We meet when the sun is directly overhead.” The king motioned to the rising celestial orb before leaving them.

A servant gave them the maps.

Amelia’s hand shook when she accepted the scroll. Greymist Forest and the Blackden Barrens swirled before her eyes. Det grinned and Amelia’s heart sank further. Of course, her sister got her way yet again.


Until the end of 2012, Women of Foxwick is only $1.99. If you enjoyed what you read, please consider buying a copy at these retailers: Amazon US / UK / DE / FR / ES / IT  Smashwords  Nook  Kobo  iTunes. You can also add on Goodreads.

I'll see everyone next Monday! 

Monday, February 6, 2012

Book Chat Special: Critique Partners Make All the Difference with Aubrie Dionne, author of TUNDRA 37

 

We have a special book chat today with author Aubrie Dionne. Her science fiction romance novel Tundra 37 debuts tomorrow and her sci-fi romance novella A Hero Rising will be out this month too, and she is here to talk about the people behind the creation of a book, also known as critique partners. 

How I met my Awesome Critique Partner, Cherie Reich
(My additional comments in BOLD)

A long, long time ago in a galaxy far away, my very first book was accepted by a really small ebook publisher (who shall remain nameless And for good reason!). While I was at this shady publisher, I met Cherie Reich, the awesome owner of this blog. Aww! We started exchanging stories, and I realized I had no idea what the rules of grammar were, especially commas. Cherie very patiently helped me through this rough period, explaining the ways of the grammar world, and thus we become critique partners. (I hope I helped her back, but I really had no idea what I was doing at the time since I'd never been published before, or worked with an editor) You've definitely helped me back! I wouldn't be half the writer I am today without you. We kept together throughout the dissolution of the publishing company who shall remain nameless and succeeded in publishing our work elsewhere.

Although we picked different publishing companies to republish our work, we kept in touch, and I submitted everything I wrote to Cherie first before submitting it for real! I think she's read every single word I've ever written since I started writing seriously! (I could send her the unicorn poem I wrote in 6th grade...*scratches chin* Hehe! You can send it, but poetry is not my specialty.) She's helped me grow as a writer and gave me encouragement along the way. We even had a group blog for awhile with a fellow author called Raven and the Writing Desk. Here's a quick plug for our book of short stories that just came out, which you can buy here.


There was one point where I really thought I was going no where. I'd submitted to so many agents and gotten hundreds of no's. I didn't think I could submit to another agent EVER again without screaming my head off at the computer screen. Cherie pushed me. She found an agent I hadn't submitted to, who she'd met at a conference, and she very politely pushed me until I finally caved in and sent this agent Paradise 21, the first book in the New Dawn series. This agent became my agent. From there, my agent sold my New Dawn series to Entangled Publishing, and my writing has gone uphill ever since.


So I only owe Cherie EVERYTHING. She's so awesome and I'm so glad I met her. It was worth going through all that awfulness at the publisher who shall remain nameless, just to meet her. For me, having critique partners made the difference between success and despair.


Aww! *blushes* I'm glad I could help out, and I completely agree that critique partners have the power to make or break a writer. I'm so glad we met, despite the publisher-who-shall-not-be-named.




Aubrie is an author and flutist in New England. Her stories have appeared in Mindflights, Niteblade, Silver Blade, A Fly in Amber, and several print anthologies including Skulls and Crossbones by Minddancer Press, Rise of the Necromancers, by Pill Hill Press, Nightbird Singing in the Dead of Night by Nightbird Publishing, Dragontales and Mertales by Wyvern Publications, A Yuletide Wish by Nightwolf Publications, and Aurora Rising by Aurora Wolf Publications.  Her epic fantasy is published with Wyvern Publications, and several of her ebooks are published with Lyrical Press and Gypsy Shadow Publishing. When she’s not writing, she plays in orchestras and teaches flute at Plymouth State University and a community music school.
Twitter: @AuthorAubrie 


Tundra 37
A New Dawn, #2
Author: Aubrie Dionne
Genre: Sci-Fi Romance
Length: 288 pages
Release Date: February 2012
ePub ISBN: 978-1-937044-49-7
Print ISBN: 978-1-937044-51-0

To Purchase: Amazon  Barnes & Noble


Tundra 37 Book Trailer:

A New Dawn Novel, Book Two
Gemme is a hi-tech matchmaker who pairs the next generation of Lifers aboard the Expedition, a deep space transport vessel destined for Paradise 18. When the identity of her lifemate pops up on her screen, she’s shocked that he’s the achingly gorgeous and highly sought after Lieutenant Miles Brentwood—a man oblivious to her existence. Believing everyone will think she contrived the match, she erases it from the computer’s memory.

Just as comets pummel the ship and destroy the pairing system forever.
With the Expedition disabled, the colonists must crash land on the barren ice world of Tundra 37 where Gemme is reassigned to an exploratory mission, led by Lieutenant Brentwood. Only in the frozen tundra does she understand the shape of his heart and why the computer has entwined their destinies.

 
A Hero Rising
A New Dawn, #3
Author: Aubrie Dionne
Genre: Sci-Fi Romance
Length: novella
Release Date: February 2012
ePub ISBN: 978-1-937044-83-1

Prequel to A New Dawn - Book Three
After watching his love leave on a colony ship, James Wilfred must save those left behind from a planetary apocalypse. Their salvation lies in an unfinished ship tucked away in a secret government base, and only James can break in and pilot him and his people to freedom on a nearby space station.

Skye O’Connor’s boyfriend never returns after his gang attempts an assassination of the Governor, and the State Building is destroyed. Worse, crazed moonshiners addicted to the chemical Morpheus have stormed the city, and she must find a safe place for her and her boyfriend’s daughter. When a heroic man saves her, Skye asks to accompany him on his quest to find the last colony ship left on Earth.

As the city falls around them, James and Skye must work together to build a new future, all the while rediscovering their ability to love, before the apocalypse claims them both.