Showing posts with label part iii. Show all posts
Showing posts with label part iii. Show all posts

Friday, March 1, 2013

Friday Flash: Part III "S.S. Argonaut"

 

Today's #fridayflash was actually a short story I wrote a long time ago. I've decided to break the story into three parts, so here is part three, the final part. Part I was up two Fridays ago (February 15), and Part II was up last Friday (February 22).
 
PART III, S.S. Argonaut 

We saw very few people in Sector D. The ones we did come across were either dead or dying. I wanted to help them, but Bethany drifted in and out of consciousness, and I wouldn’t dillydally when her and our children’s lives were at stake.

Fear gripped me again when we entered Sector E.

Spacesuits lay scattered like torn-up tissues. Several escape pods burned. Laser blasts lit the air. The taste of metal coated my tongue from the scent of blood. People groaned. Died.

“Lieutenant!”

I turned toward the voice of Sergeant Merris. Her gun smoked in her hands. The laser fire had melted the plastic.

“What happened?” Tiny hands clutched my pants as my children clung to me.

“Utter disaster, sir. We had to fire. Five escape pods are damaged. They bolted toward them.”

Another crash shattered the hull. Several people screamed, and I leaned against the wall to keep upright.

If we weren’t quick, the metal wouldn’t hold and space would suck us into its dark void.

“Listen up, everyone.” I shouted above the noise. “Shut up!”

Shrieks turned into whispers. Then everyone quieted.

“Those uninjured help an injured neighbor into the escape pods. Be careful but quick. Do not panic. We will all vacate the S.S. Argonaut safely. Escape pod pilots, take your positions within.”

The entire ship shifted and popped, but the crew listened.

“Sergeant Merris, take my children and wife to pod fourteen. I will pilot that one.” I handed Bethany over to the steely-eyed woman.

“Yes, sir.”

I watched as my family went to pod fourteen.

“Quickly, but don’t push. There is plenty of time.” I walked the perimeter and spoke, keeping my voice calm, soothing. Don’t let them see you panic, Jackson. The S.S. Argonaut wouldn’t make it through the asteroid belt. I knew this as a fact. The captain manned the helm as a suicide mission, but the escape pods could still save our people.

I didn’t know if it would be enough, but I would take possible death over certain death any day.

A more orderly evacuation happened, and I completed my rounds until I was certain the last able-bodied person had boarded an escape vessel.

I jogged over to pod fourteen and entered it. The door closed with a vacuum-locked seal. I glanced over the panel and buckled myself into the seat.

“Everyone, buckle up,” I said over a loud speaker connected with the fifteen pods.

I pressed the ignition button, knowing the other pilots would do the same. My wrist ached, but it wasn’t broken, just bruised with a nasty knot on it. I would fight through the pain. Then I opened the escape hatch.

The large doors slid open to inky space. Far away, I spotted diamond-like stars winking at us. A few meteors drifted behind, but the escape pods were much more versatile than the huge spaceship.

“One by one, pilots. You know the drill.”

Escape Pod One lifted off and disappeared through the hole in the ship. Two, three, four, and five followed. Six and seven were hesitant, but they vanished.

The dead, people’s belongings, and ship parts floated before us. Eight through eleven dodged the debris and left the S.S. Argonaut.

Two more and I edged our pod forward. We struck the dead and I couldn’t help but wince at the dishonor.

“I’m sorry,” I whispered as we entered space.

The escape pod flew light and fast away from the meteors, but I glanced behind us at our hope for a good future.

The S.S. Argonaut poised like a toy before a gigantic asteroid. The fifteenth escape pod left the ship as a fireball erupted.

“Oh, Captain.” I lamented his loss.

I ignited our thrusters, but our tiny vessel felt the heat from the explosion. We tumbled forward in the blast. My muscles trembled trying to keep the pod steady. Everything shook and roared.

Then silence.

Tiny silver ships adrift like dandelion seeds in the wind. We were alive.

Friday, October 21, 2011

#fridayflash "Compulsion" Part III #horror


*This is the final installment of "Compulsion." You can read Part I here and Part II here.*
Edited: Oops, I forgot to add the "here" links. They're added now. Sorry!

Compulsion
Part III

I opened my eyes. The low light made me smile.
“How do you feel?”
I cocked my head. Peace spread through me as I looked around this room. It seemed familiar, so did the man. Did I know him? He touched my arm and I suppressed a giggle.
“I feel wonderful. Who are you?”
The man grinned. “I’m Mike and I have someone I’d like for you to see.”
“Hello, Mike.” I bounced in the chair as he removed a photograph and handed it to me.
She looked familiar too. Brown hair, a big bright smile, blue eyes. I liked her.
“Her name is Helen Fairling. I want you to find her for me and then return here. You’ll know what to do.”
I looked at him. His certainty reassured me. I studied her picture again, memorizing her features.
Mike handed me a slip of paper and a blue pill.
I always wondered what it was with blue pills. They were calming. I swallowed the pill without water. I looked at the address on the paper. Certainty filled me and I smiled wider.
"You do know what to do, right?"
I looked up at Mike. The intensity of his eyes was familiar. I didn't want to disappoint him.
“Yes, I’ll remember what to do, brother.”

Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Part III of The Phoenix Prophetess

Yesterday I finished chapter twenty-seven in The Phoenix Prophetess. It is the beginning of Part III in my novel. Right now, the novel stands at 67,008 words. I have done a brief outline of the rest of the book, and it appears that Part III will consist of eleven chapters, making the total chapters for the book 37. It's a slightly odd number, and I may end up combining an earlier chapter to make 36 chapters, but we'll have to see. That will come when I reach the editing process. I have ten chapters left to write, and if I do stick to one chapter a week from now on, I'll have my first novel finished at the end of August, which is a month or two earlier than I originally thought. Of course, I might get on a writing spree and end up finishing the novel in less time, but it will be finished at least by the end of August. I'm so excited about it all. I just have ten chapters left! The only bad thing is that I'm so close to finishing the novel that it is about all I can think about. I would like to get back to work on Moonlight Murders or write my first wizard story titled "Eclipse" for the Way of the Wizard anthology, but all I can think about is Yssa's journey and finishing The Phoenix Prophetess. I going to re-read chapters one and two in Moonlight Murders, so perhaps it will give the inspiration to write chapter three today or tomorrow. We'll have to see. Anyway, I wanted to update the blog on where I'm at with The Phoenix Prophetess, since I didn't get a chance to do so yesterday.