Showing posts with label marcus. Show all posts
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Friday, August 26, 2011

#flashfiction "Jealousy's Rage"

*First, look, a new Flash picture. *grins* Okay, today's flash piece is taken from last week's flash piece (you can read here). Now we get Veronica's view of the same scene.*

Jealousy's Rage

Veronica froze at the violin's soul-singing notes. Her eyes briefly closed at the flawless beauty. Each note was precise. The tone delectable. It was the sweetest dessert, a first kiss, and first heartbreak wrapped into each stroke of the bow.

Why can't I play like that?

Her eyes flung open and she lunged forward. The violin music yanked her toward the stage and what virtuoso was playing a piece she only dreamed she had the talent to play.

When she saw the blond girl, her heart clenched, hardened, and shattered in one beat. She was her own age, seventeen, eighteen perhaps, no more than nineteen. Veronica could only hope to be half as talented. Everything she worked for, the hours of practice every day, the grueling lessons, Veronica realized it was all for nothing compared to this girl.

"Who's that?"

Marcus's breath brushed against her. She turned, noticing how he couldn't seem to take his eyes off the new girl. He never looked at me like that . . . even when we were dating. Her jaw clenched and popped.

"I don't know. Who cares?" She wrapped her arm around his and tugged. It was like trying to drag a statue down. "Come on, we'll be late."

He yanked his arm away from her. "Hey, Karoline, do you know who that is?"

Veronica stumbled a couple steps. Marcus had nearly dragged her with him before he wrenched his arm from her grasp. She ignored what the flutist said and focused on the stage again. The piece was rapidly coming to a close. Her breath caught in her chest.

". . . musicians."

"And her . . . ?"

"Nadia . . . senior with us."

When the piece ended, Veronica shook her head, dispelling the perfect notes from her mind. She straightened, her shoulders squaring. She lifted her chin and glared at the musician. She crossed her arms over her chest.

The other girl may be better, but Veronica would be smarter.

She wasn't about to let her win.

Friday, August 19, 2011

#fridayflash "Love at First Note"


*Today's #fridayflash is inspired by the first time Marcus saw Nadia. These two are characters in Virtuoso, which I'm currently rewriting.*



Love at First Note

Marcus heard the music before he saw the performer.

The violin's strings ached out a soulful melody. The sound was almost human, yet the girl on the stage tempted it from each finger placement and stroke of the horsehair bow across the strings. Slender fingers danced among each note. Blond hair tickled the violin and nearly curtained off her pretty face.

He'd heard violin music before but never like this.

He stopped moving, mesmerized by the performance. His breath stuck in his throat. His heart joined in rhythm to the piece.

"Who's that?" He breathed.

"I don't know. Who cares?" Veronica wrapped her arm around his and tugged. "Come on, we'll be late."

He yanked his arm away from her. "Hey, Karoline, do you know who that is?"

Karoline twisted to look at him. "Yeah, she moved in a few blocks from my house. Her parents are musicians."

"And her name?" He couldn't keep the impatience from his voice. Her name was as important as air.

"Nadia Godunov, I think. She'll be a senior with us."

Nadia. The musicality of the name fit the woman.

When she finished, she lifted her head. A sweet smile touched her lips. A private smile. But he didn't feel guilty seeing it or spying on her performance.

He only wanted to hear her play again . . . or kiss those soft-looking lips.