Today I have an excerpt from the short story "Nightmare at the Freak Show" from The Nightmare Collection.
“Come one, come all! See the beast.
Half-man, half animal. Come buy your tickets. A nickel will let you watch this
extraordinary creature.”
He could hear Victor’s voice calling to the carnival
patrons, so he only had moments before performing for them. The red sheet fell
to his feet and shielded his body from view until the grand reveal. He crouched
down, and the shackle around his ankle clanked.
“Yes, yes, gather around. When you enter, do not go too
close to the cage. The beast is very dangerous, and you must take care.” Victor
flung open the tent’s flap, and sunlight poured into the opening. “Enter, my
friends, and be amazed!”
Men, women, and children filled the tent, and the flap closed
behind them.
He trembled under the sheet while they crowded around. Their
proximity overwhelmed him, and the child monster cowered toward the rear of the
cage. The bars pressed against his back.
“He’s so little,” a woman said.
“I see no monster here.” A man let out a grunt in
disappointment.
“Take the sheet off. Let’s see him.”
The spectators grew restless from anticipation.
Victor took a stick and raked it across the bars. The
monster winced and covered his ears. He hated when his master did that.
“Show them, beast. Remove the sheet.”
He rose to his feet and touched the soft cotton fabric. With
a flourish, he yanked the red sheet off his body. It floated in the air like a
leaf before pooling behind him.
A collective gasp filled the room.
He stood still for a moment and let them see his form. The
hairy creature he was. Then, baring his dagger teeth, he leapt at the bars. His
hands clung to them, and he growled.
Shrieks of horror burst from several ladies. A couple women fainted. Children clutched to their fathers and cried. The men skirted farther away from the cage.
Shrieks of horror burst from several ladies. A couple women fainted. Children clutched to their fathers and cried. The men skirted farther away from the cage.
His gaze roved around the room. Their reactions were so
predictable, and the creature knew the next shows would produce more
spectators. They feared him, but they needed to see the beast. His angry grin
faltered when he spotted one child.
A girl no more than ten stared at him. Clothed in a frilly
yellow dress, she smiled. Her blue eyes were wide and kind, and her golden
curls bounced upon her head when she moved forward. Before she touched the bars,
Victor snatched her hand.
“Now, now, my child. Not too close.” He clapped his hands.
“Ladies and gentlemen, you’ve seen him. Tell your friends. We’ll be here all
weekend.”
Once again, Victor opened the flap.
The fainted women revived and clutched to their men while
the people left the freak show behind. The girl left last and kept her gaze
upon him until the sunshine swallowed her.
The tent entrance closed. Muted laughter filled his ears,
and he sank to the dirty, hay-strewn floor. He only had a slight reprieve
before the show would begin again. Everyone had to see the caged monster.
A legend is hungry tonight.
A child monster will get its first taste of blood in Nightmare at the Freak Show. Four friend will enter the forest on December night, but only one can survive in Once Upon a December Nightmare. Almost ten years after Cassie's December nightmare, the monster awakens to hunt again in Nightmare Ever After.
A child monster will get its first taste of blood in Nightmare at the Freak Show. Four friend will enter the forest on December night, but only one can survive in Once Upon a December Nightmare. Almost ten years after Cassie's December nightmare, the monster awakens to hunt again in Nightmare Ever After.
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17 comments:
What a sad beginning...
That is a sad beginning, I agree with Alex. But what writing! Bodacious. I'm liking the Nightmare collection. It's fantastically written. You feel you're there. *gulp*
Awesome. A caged creature/person can only take so much pressure before he snaps. This must be quite the collection! :)
Wow . . I didn't expect this sad beginning . . .beautiful, haunting writing, Cherie!
Wonderful excerpt. I never wanted to feel sorry for the monster! *LOL*
Geez....poor creature!
Wow :) I've just started reading a book about a girl who joined a circus since she had fur all over her body like a lion (weird description... i've only just started it and it's in norwegian!)
Anyway, just wanted to let you know, i changed my blog name, you can find me over at thelittlenordiccabin.blogspot.com now :)
I love the excerpt! Now I want to read the whole thing.
Beautifully written I want to read on.
oh creepy. I don't know why but small monsters seem scarier, especially hungry ones. And I also feel sorry for him!! Well written, Cherie!
Well written and sad. Poor monster. Wonder what happens??
Shannon at The Warrior Muse
A sad start- but very intriguing. Great writing! Have I mentioned that I love the cover? Awesome!
~Jess
A sad but great start...makes you wonder if monsters feel anything, anything at all?
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I feel bad for the poor creature. Great excerpt!
Fantastic snippet! I already want to read more! But aw, I feel so sorry for him. At least that one girl wasn't afraid of him like the rest...
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