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Tuesday, January 8, 2013

An Excerpt from Michael Offutt's OCULUS and a giveaway

I had the honor of reading an early draft of Oculus, which I thought was even better than Slipstream. Although I miss the world of Avalon Michael created in book one, I love how realistically he portrayed Cornell. Plus, the questions keep coming on what will happen next, and that cliffhanger ending ... wow! I can't wait for book three! But for now, I have an excerpt from Oculus.

Excerpt


“Pendragon, go in for Reedy,” Coach Miller said.
Jordan skated out and almost immediately grabbed the puck from a rebound shot.  He took two whacks at it; the second went wide.  Over the next minute, the Wildcats did a great job making the Cornell defense move out of its box set.  But they also failed to get the puck to the open spaces after they went to all that trouble.
Nine minutes to go.
Castro passed the puck to Barker who took a shot at the New Hampshire goal; Cox blocked and tipped it out of play.  Grego flashed Jordan a grin.  Andy winked.
A shadow in Jordan’s peripheral vision.  Falna again.
Whack! The defenseman knocked Grego down.
Andy, you’re too close.  STOP!  Jordan didn’t have time to yell the words.
In the next instant, Jordan watched with horror as Andy, not aware that Grego had fallen down, skated over his wrist.
Blood gushed over the ice.
Jordan dropped to his teammate’s side, but didn’t move him, and blood spattered over the front of his sweater and across his face.  Grego’s lips twisted in agony, whistles blew, and the Athletic Trainer skated out with a towel as emergency staff rushed to help Grego off the ice.  Blood pooled everywhere with Grego trying to stop the flow with his fingers.  As they got the large man to his feet, Jordan trailed slightly behind, staring at the huge and numerous blood drops left in his wake.
Jordan heard gunshots in his mind.  He recalled shattering glass.  So much blood.  I’m not on Avalon, I’m on Earth.  These aren’t the Scorchers.
Andy skated over.  “I didn’t fucking see him.”  His face had blanched white.  His eyes looked watery, emotional.
“It’s not your fault,” Jordan said, voice desperate.  “He got knocked down and—”  He shrugged helplessly, feeling his throat tighten.
“I’m feeling dizzy,” Andy said.  “I can handle a little blood, but this is making me sick.”
Jordan held him.  Andy’s eyes brimmed with tears of frustration.
The crowd in Lynah Rink dropped to a whisper.  Flashbulbs fired off from behind the glass.  Then the Athletic Trainers and Coaches whisked Joe off to the locker room and another emergency team that stood by to assist.
Jordan stared in awe at the massive amount of blood that lay in red pools over the surface of the white ice.  Red and white—Cornell colors, only seeing it like this was awful.  Then he heard an eerie whispering in his mind.  He did not understand the words, but it left him feeling chilled.
“There’s so much blood,” Andy murmured, blinking and in shock.
A moment later, skaters appeared carrying jugs which they used to apply yellow disinfectant.   The color created a huge puddle of orange-red that seemed to grow wider by the second as they pushed it around, not really knowing what to do about it.
“It looks like a crime scene,” Paul stated, joining them.  Melancholy layered thick upon his tone.  “Like someone gutted a pig.”
Jordan swallowed, unable to pull his eyes away.
“Do you think he’s going to be okay?” Andy asked him.  Jordan saw his friend was hurting, feeling bad.
Jordan tried to focus and squeezed Andy’s shoulder reassuringly.  “Yeah.  He’ll be fine.  It wasn’t your fault.”
Townley skated over.  “Just spoke with the refs.  They’re trying to get the ice cleaned up to resume play.  Just sit tight and don’t worry about Joe.  He’s a really tough guy.  And don’t lose morale either, men.  We’re keeping the pressure on the Wildcats, and I think we can pull this out,” he said.  “It’s been fucking rough out there—I know, especially with what just happened.  No one wants to see a puddle of blood on the ice, but we all get hurt.  Hockey’s a rough sport.”   He looked at Jordan.  “Good job rookie, but go change your jersey and wash your face.   You’ve got blood all over you.”
Jordan looked down at himself and skated off to the locker room to grab another sweater from the Equipment Director.  When he returned, they were still cleaning the ice—the stain covered fully half of one side of the rink now.
Jordan’s fingers trembled.  He kept his hands balled into a fist so no one would notice.
“Blood has a lot of color in it,” Klaes remarked.
Jordan nodded, thinking the same thing.
“A video of this is already on YouTube,” Paul said with a misplaced laugh. “Want to take a look?  Andy, you look like you’re gonna cry in it.”  He offered Andy his smartphone with a snicker, but Andy didn’t take it.  Jordan took a seat next to his friend and said nothing.  But he did glare at Paul.


Autumn has arrived in New York, and Jordan Pendragon attends his first classes as a freshman at Cornell. Born with a brilliant mathematical mind, he balances life as a research assistant with that of a student athlete.

But Jordan also has a quest. He must find the Black Tower, a monolithic edifice housing a thing that defines the very structure of the universe. Jordan believes it is buried somewhere in Antarctica under miles of prehistoric ice.

October finds Jordan earning a starting position with the Cornell hockey team. But a dark cloud gathers over his rookie season. Unexplained deaths, whispers of a cannibal cult, a prophecy, and a stone known only as the Oculus, cast a shadow over his athletic ambitions. It is the start of a terrifying journey down a path of mystery, murder, and to a confrontation with an Evil more ancient than the stars.

Free short story that's a lead-in to this book series: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/236636

Michael Offutt writes speculative fiction books that have science fiction, LGBT, and paranormal elements. His first book, "Slipstream" has received some critical acclaim and was published by Double Dragon in the spring. The sequel, "Oculus" came out in November 2012. He has one brother, no pets, and a few roots that keep his tree of life sufficiently watered. By day, he works for the State of Utah as a Technical Specialist. By night, he watches lots of t.v., writes, draws, and sometimes dreams of chocolate.

Michael Offutt graduated from the University of Idaho in 1994 with a Bachelor's degree in English.

He keeps a blog and would appreciate a visit or two even if all you want to do is say hi.





Twitter: @MichaelOffutt


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Friday, July 13, 2012

Women of Foxwick - A New Review and a Sale!

 

First off, Michael Offutt has given Women of Foxwick and excellent review. You can read it here. Plus, until the end of July Women of Foxwick is on sale at Smashwords. You can purchase my fantasy short story collection for half-off using the coupon code SSW50.

Tuesday, May 15, 2012

Fantasy Chat: Interview with Michael Offutt, author of SLIPSTREAM

 

Everyone, please welcome Michael Offutt to the blog today! He's here to tell us about his fantastic science fiction novel Slipstream.

Michael, tell us a little about yourself.  I work for the government. I read a lot of fiction.  I’m a slow writer.  It’s difficult for me to focus on things for very long because my attention is prone to wandering.  I’ll usually read four novels at a stretch because I get bored of one and move to another. Cycling through them keeps them fresh to me so that I can finish them.


In two sentences, describe your novel Slipstream.  Jordan Pendragon is a 17-year-old boy that undertakes a journey that not only unravels the mystery of his own birth, but one of the darkest secrets of the universe. It’s a story with hockey sticks, crystal spiders, and monsters from the Id.

Slipstream incorporates a lot of science in it. How much research did you do for this novel? I’m a science and math nerd. I read Hawking’s book called “The Grand Design” and had read a book called “Einstein’s Relativity and the Quantum Revolution”. I read those for pleasure, so I don’t count them as research, but they helped quite a bit to refresh my memory from college. I read a lot of science journals in-between bouts of fiction.

I love the mythology represented within Slipstream. Why did you decide to use Mesoamerican mythology? Jordan’s abilities are all dependent on him being able to see what’s going on. So absolute darkness is kind of his Achilles heel. This led me to research on the “Lords of Night” which are meso-American gods. The evil people in SLIPSTREAM are trying to bring the meso-American gods to life using a fusion of technology and flesh.  It’s pure madness, and a nod to Aztec mythology where they believed humans arose from the shattered bones of dead gods.

The humans of Avalon are living in a post-apocalyptic world.  Outside the realm of the book (but in my notes) there are people who claim their survival was foretold in Mayan pyramids and interpret the survivors as a stand-in for “the shattered bones of dead gods”. The trope of Life Green makes immortality a distinct possibility. So those in power have come to think of themselves as new gods instead of as humans (having far exceeded a normal life span) and they go about encouraging this belief.

Some even go so far as to claim that Avalon is in fact the underworld and that people who don’t see this, are hiding from the naked truth. I should also point out that Ian Gooding (the central bad guy) was born in the area of Guatemala. So he is of Mayan descent (again not in the book) and is also a minor archeologist (having found and translated the Popol Vuh). I know all of this isn’t in the book, but I cut some 60,000 words from the finished manuscript to come in at the highest acceptable word count. So yeah, Ian wants to become a god because he rightfully feels that he has been chosen to summon back into the world the nine Lords of Night because of something he read on the wall of an ancient Mayan city lost within the jungles of Guatemala (look up the lost city of Mirador sometime using Google).

I had to cut huge swaths of text from my book. No one was going to publish a 180,000 word monstrosity. Background not essential to understanding the plot got cut.

How did you go about creating the two different worlds (ours and Avalon)? My long story is allegorical. You are picking up on that in just this book but it becomes even more clear in the sequel. It’s completely intentional and yes, has to do with Arthurian stuff.

What are you working on now? Is there a release date yet for book two in the series? (Yes, I want to read book two now.) There is no release date. I’ve got half of the book to rewrite based on feedback from betas. I have no idea how long that will be. I’m slow…like a snail…when it comes to writing.

If you could recommend one book, what book would that be and why? Neuromancer by William Gibson. I love that book and it won the Hugo, the Nebula, and the Philip K. Dick award all in the same year. It is what drove me to write SLIPSTREAM.

Thanks Cherie for the interview. You ask tough questions.

You're welcome! I loved the book and do look forward to book two.

Isn't it pretty? And very perfect for Michael's SLIPSTREAM!
I have a contest for the release of my book.  I will pick one random person who comments on this post to win a $5 Amazon Gift Card and a SLIPSTREAM jeweled spider (the same person wins both prizes). The jeweled spider really sparkles in the sunlight. I hope whoever wins it really likes it. Also, please make sure that your email is linked to your signature in some way. And yes, the crystal spiders play an important role in my book.

Rules:
1)      Mark my book “To Read” on Goodreads.
2)      Comment on this post.
3)      Tweet this post if you have twitter. You don’t have to sign-up for twitter. It’s the “honor” system.

That’s it. I will choose a winner on Saturday, May 19th.  And thank you, Cherie, for having me on your fine blog.