For the A to
Z Challenge, I'm having twenty-six flash fiction pieces from my Foxwick Kingdom
and its surrounding neighbors. Soon A to Z Flashes of Foxwick will be
available in e-book format. You can add this to your Goodreads list here.
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Ivander’s Ire
Ivander lost
sight of his father.
The battle against
Lochhollow raged around him. Swords clashed with metallic shrieks, and the
stench of death coated his tongue. Ivander pressed through the bodies. What had
happened to Foxwick’s king? Fear and anger wormed into his heart. If something
happened to his father, he didn’t know what he would do.
Ivander wasn’t
ready to be king.
He spun slowly,
his tip of his sword glistening with fresh blood. Through the chaos, he spotted
his father’s white horse. Mud caked its fur as it stomped the ground, but his
father wasn’t there.
“Father!” He
raced toward the horse and grabbed hold its reins. “Shh.”
The horse
settled at his touch.
Five paces away,
Ivander finally saw the gleam of his father’s crown.
King Brum fought
two soldiers. One bore no mark of ranking, but the other’s crown shone in the
noonday light. Lochhollow’s prince had arrived at the battlefield, and urgency surged
in Ivander’s veins. If Ivander could wound or even kill him, then they’d have
to end the war.
His father
shoved his sword through the other soldier while the prince sliced into Brum’s
arm.
King Brum cried
out in pain and staggered back.
Ivander lifted
his sword and struck out at the prince.
“Ivander!” Brum
reached for his son, but Ivander didn’t stop fighting.
Rage boiled in
Ivander’s blood. How dare the Lochhollowans war against Foxwick? His own
grandmother had been a Lochhollowan royalty and this prince was his blood kin,
but they turned on Foxwick after she left with Lady Death and entered the
Shadowlands.
Today, he would
send this man to her frightening realm.
Their swords
locked in a fierce battle. Each strike settled through his body, but Ivander
wouldn’t give up. His pace remained steady, despite his desire to kill
Lochhollow’s prince.
“Give up,”
Ivander said, nearly spitting the words at his opponent.
“Never!”
“Argh!” Ivander
struck the prince’s sword, and it flew from his hands. When the prince tumbled
to the ground, Ivander thrust his weapon at the prince’s throat. Before Prince
Ivander could slice off the man’s head, another blade granted Ivander pause.
“Stop, my son.”
King Brum held him at bay.
“But we can stop
this war if we kill him.” Ivander’s eyes narrowed as he focused on the prince.
The prince couldn’t be much older than he was, but it didn’t stay his hand.
Certainly the Lochhollowan would’ve tried to kill them, if he could.
Brum stepped
closer to Ivander. Although the battle continued around them, it seemed like
they were the only two on the field. “Kindness can travel a longer way than
wrath. I will let you choose, but remember my words.”
When his father
stepped back, Ivander’s warmth left him. He had to decide whether to grant life
or death. His body shook with his warring emotions. Ivander wanted this man’s
death, an end to war for his people, but the power of familial blood sang to
him. They were cousins, despite the war. Ivander breathed in and slowly lowered
his sword. “Remember this day that Ivander, son of King Brum, spared your life.
Now go.”
The man fled.
What would
become of their kingdoms, Ivander didn’t know, but his madness drained from
him. Perhaps his father’s words were right, and perhaps their battles would
soon come to an end.
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12 comments:
Wow, what a tough choice. But, I think he made the right decision. Does it end the war? Will he regret his decision? All wonderful questions.
As always, Cherie, your powerful writing both entertains and makes one think. Great job!
Another great Love it
I love how Ivander showed mercy. And I love the name Ivander! Great job, Cherie.
Ivander took the higher road...
It reminds me of Frodo telling Gandalf that Bilbo should have killed Gollum when he had the chance, and Gandalf telling Frodo that Gollum still had a part to play in everythiing (well, that's what they said in the movie. I can't remember the book!).
left with Lady Death and entered the Shadowlands. <-- love that.
Excellent battle scene!!!
Ivander the Merciful!
Great job Cherie.
It's not easy to write a battle scene - you did very well. "Kindness can travel a longer way than wrath"...that's a memorable phrase. I envisage this story happening in a place like the wilds of Scotland, it so atmospheric.
Nice battle scene. I know how hard those are to write so, great job!
What a fun thing to do for the A to Z challenge! Thanks for sharing your story.
Wow, the battle rages on and there is this intense conversation. Great job!
It was a hard decision. I admire Ivander that he could make it.
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