For the A to
Z Challenge, I'm having twenty-six flash fiction pieces from my Foxwick Kingdom
and its surrounding neighbors. Soon A to Z Flashes of Foxwick will be
available in e-book format. You can add this to your Goodreads list here.
C
Crestwoods’ Creativity
Det presented her closed hand to her
twin sister Amelia. “I have something for you.”
“What is it?” Amelia flipped the next
page of her book.
“Come on, look!” Det bounced on her toes
as her sister huffed and glared at Det’s fist.
“I don’t have all day for this.”
If Det wasn’t so pleased with herself,
then she would’ve refused to show her sister. Why couldn’t Amelia be happy for
her? Instead, Amelia studied her stupid herbs and spells all the time. Det’s
fingers unfurled to reveal five tiny brown seeds. “I got these for you, for
us.”
Amelia plucked a seed and studied it.
Her brow furrowed, and a frown puckered her lips. “How did you get an apple
seed?”
Det looked away and trailed her toe
across the wooden floorboards. “Well, I was at Farmer Donal’s house, and the
apples looked so good, so I kinda—”
“You stole it, Adetta.”
Det cringed when Amelia said her full
name. “Well, I borrowed it. When you use your magic to turn them into a tree,
we’ll give Farmer Donal an apple.”
Amelia slammed the book upon the table.
“I haven’t learned enough yet. Don’t you know that? I can barely get us enough
money from my potions, much less produce apple trees. If mom and dad were still
here—”
“But they’re not. We’re all we have.”
Det closed her eyes, and tears burned behind the lids. How could Lady Death
leave her and her sister alone? “You have to try. Please.”
Amelia stood so quickly the chair fell
behind her. “Fine, but only because we owe Farmer Donal an apple and don’t have
the coins to pay him.”
Det smirked and wiped the tears from her
eyes. Her plan worked, if her sister could produce the tree, but Det believed
in her. She followed behind as they left the cottage for their small yard. “Here
looks like a nice spot.”
Amelia nodded and knelt upon the ground.
Her fingers dug into the rich earth before she plopped an apple seed into the
hole and covered it back up. Then, she placed her hands over the area.
“You remember the spell, right?” Det
asked, bouncing on her toes again.
“I think so. Let me concentrate.” Amelia
closed her eyes.
“Tiny
apple seed.
Roots
break free.
May
this tree grow and produce fruit.”
Nothing happened.
“I’ll never do it and we’ll end up owing
Farmer Donal our last coins.” Amelia glared at Det.
Her finger tapped against her lips.
Det’d been so certain Amelia could do this. “Maybe try something else with the
spell. You can do it.”
“Okay, maybe I can try rhyming the spell.”
Amelia breathed in and closed her eyes again.
Of course, Det didn’t really know if
this would work, but it sounded good.
“Tiny
apple seed,
We
have a great need
For
your roots to break free
And
grow into a tree.
So
grow and bloom
Before
it’s our doom.”
Amelia’s voice lilted with each line,
and her hands glowed.
When she finished the last line, Det
grabbed her sister and yanked her away from the expanding apple tree. The trunk
turned into branches, leaves, and fruit—ripe for the picking—right before their
eyes. This tree could be their lifeline.
“Wow,” the sisters said in unison, but
Det believed Amelia could do it all along.
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23 comments:
The expanding apple tree made my eyes pop. And great dialogue, Cherie.
Nice piece of flash fiction. I agree with Kittie. The dialogue is great.
And now they can repay the farmer!
Love this little piece! I like the sisters.
Great dynamics between the two sisters. :)
Yay, she did it! If this was a continuing story I'd say something would have to go wrong soon. Like they get greedy with their magic, and then there's some terrible consequence... Or whatever!
Enjoyed this piece! Great writing, Cherie!
An excellent little piece of writing. I am so digging the writing blogs at the moment.
Shaun
Valleys ShutterBug
Love the sisters' relationship, it feels very authentic. And I just now saw that you are going to make the Foxwick Flashes available as an e-book, that's awesome and a great idea!
Love the sisters' relationship, it feels very authentic. And I just now saw that you are going to make the Foxwick Flashes available as an e-book, that's awesome and a great idea!
Thanks for drawing us into your magical kingdom. I'm entranced already. I appreciate your finding and following me, so I could readily do the same.
Great flash, if only we could all make an apple tree grow like that :)
I agree with the others, great dialogue and visualizations. The story is great, Cherie.
The relationship between the sisters comes through nicely.
Good post.
Great flash!
I wanna make an apple tree grow like that! Sigh, not in the cards for me, though. LOL.
My C
Loved the tree expanding. Great rapport established between the sisters.
Great post for C I love fantasy stories....
do check out my C at GAC a-z
Made me smile!
Another great entry! I wonder what happens if you eat an apple enhanced by magic. Are they like genetically modified now?
Jamie Gibbs
Fellow A-Z Buddy
Mithril Wisdom
Cool story, and spiffy dialogue!
--Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2012
Twitter: @AprilA2Z
#atozchallenge
Oh, very nice. I'll check out your ebook.
Wow. What a great piece of short fiction. I agree with others: the dialog really zings!
I love how, magic or not, they still bicker in that way that sisters have perfected :-)
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