Love’s Choice
His eyelids
slipped closed as he sank further into the warm water. Gentle music from a harp
glistened along the marble tiles. His fingers pushed bubbles across the pool’s
water. A sigh tumbled from his lips before he heard the splash and felt the
waves lapping against his bare chest.
“Go away,” he
said, refusing to open his eyes.
“Oh, Edonys,
get over yourself, dear brother.” A burble of laughter struck him at the same
time the water did.
He sputtered
and wiped the suds from his face. “Dite, go away.”
She pouted
with her full lips, and if she wasn’t his blood kin, she might’ve gotten away
with that look. “Don’t you want to know why I came?”
“I don’t
really care.” He settled back on the pool’s bench. Nothing she could say would
make him care.
“Father’s
looking for you.” She reclined in the water, her golden skin glistened under
the sun’s rays. Her reddish-blond feathers on her wings appeared almost crimson from the water.
“Then he can
find me.”
“He says it’s
time.”
“Time for
what?” His gaze focused upon her as she stood in the water. Drops splattered
into the pool from her body.
Drop, drop.
“Don’t you
know?” She crossed her arms and stared at him.
No playing
coy now. His heart dropped to his toes like water draining from the pool. He
lifted himself out of the water, shook his own golden wings, and padded over to his towel.
“I don’t have
time for this.” His ran the cloth over his body, but it couldn’t remove his
knowledge. Of course Father would send her, but couldn’t she see he wasn’t
ready? If he didn’t accept, then his father couldn’t—
“You must
take a wife, my dear princeling.” Dite’s voice grew soft, nearly melancholic in
its beauty. She’d gotten out of the pool and touched his arm with her damp
hand. He gazed at those perfectly manicured fingers. “The Cupidians need our
next king before our dear father dies.”
“I know.” But
they couldn’t have a new king until he found a wife, and he refused to choose
because his new wife meant his father’s death.
Their planet
couldn’t ask this of him, could it?
He wouldn’t
choose.
9 comments:
What an awful predicament to be in. I love the scene you've set here.
You are very good at descriptions; I could 'see' this.
I agree with Esther - my mind's eye was instantly pushed to this scene. It was so vivid!
And now I want more. Right now. I have this horrible gnawing urge to know Edonys finds someone to love yet reconciles it with the impending horrific resolution.
I have kind of a thing for space fantasy, though I don't read it very often...and the fact that it looks like you're encompassing Greek myth into it (at least with some of the names)makes this undying need worse.
This is awesome.
darn you. ;)
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Loved the last few lines. Perfect.
Great story Cherie! How perfect for Valentine's day. I love the twist=) have a great weekend!
Very nicely done, as usual.
Verrrry nice. You've got skills, girl. :D
Awesome piece. I love the tension and the detail.
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