*Today's #fridayflash involves an older flash piece previously posted on this blog. Yes, I'm taking the month off and giving you my Twelve Days of Christmas posts from last December (recently edited, of course).*
A Partridge in a Pear Tree
Daedalus stood
on the balcony and peered down into the garden. A faint, floral scent of the
blooming pear trees drifted up to him. His nose wrinkled, and he sneezed. Damn flowers! Through the branches, he
spotted his nephew Perdix sitting with his two sons, Icarus and Iapyx. He
snatched pieces of their conversation upon the wind.
“What does it
do, Perdix?” Icarus reclined against the large, ornamental boulder.
“I call it a
compass. When you hold it, it points toward north. With this device, sailors
will be able to sail on cloudy days and nights.” Perdix displayed his newest
invention to his cousins.
“I’m sure
father would’ve thought of something like that,” Iapyx said.
But Daedalus
hadn’t, and he knew it. Perdix was a shooting star, and he burned brighter with
each invention. The pupil had surpassed his master, and the king was beginning
to realize his nephew’s usefulness. If he wasn’t careful, Perdix would steal
his position from underneath him, and he couldn’t let that happen.
A jealous
rage consumed him like a fire in the hearth. It was bad enough that Perdix
discovered a way to cut down trees quickly. With this compass, all would be
lost.
“Boys!” He
called down to them, and all three looked up. “Icarus and Iapyx, you need to
work on your studies.”
“We already
done them,” Icarus said, not budging from his position.
“Your
geometry work as well?” He knew how much his sons hated mathematics.
“No.” Iapyx
stood. “Come along, brother, let’s finish our work.”
Perdix moved
to follow them.
“Perdix, I
need to speak with you.” Daedalus’s voice was as sharp as flint.
“Yes, sir.” The
young man waved to his cousins and disappeared into the house.
Soon Daedalus
heard his nephew’s footsteps upon the wooden stairs. When the bright-eyed young
man entered, he embraced him. “My brother would’ve been proud of you.”
Perdix’s opened
mouth changed into a beaming grin. “I miss my father, but you have become my new
father, uncle. I gained two brothers, as well, when you brought me here.”
“Come,”
Daedalus said, motioning for his nephew to follow him. He strode out onto the
balcony. “Show me your new invention.”
“It will
change everything, sir.” He handed over the small compass. It spun slowly
around and pointed north.
He studied
Perdix’s new device. “It’s rather ingenious. I will present it to the king
during afternoon court.”
The boy
glanced away, dragging his foot along the stones. “I was hoping I could go with
you to present it. I have so many more ideas and inventions that the king will
be interested in.”
Envy wrapped
around Daedalus’s heart. He saw his family losing their home and becoming
beggars upon the Athenian streets. Everything he’d worked for would be for
naught because this lad was more intelligent. He’d win the king’s affections
easily. “I don’t believe I can allow that, nephew.”
“Why not,
sir? I’ve worked hard.” Perdix met his gaze.
“But I’ve
worked harder.” The fire raged inside Daedalus. From the moment he noticed the
boy’s talents, he knew he had to keep a close watch on him. Now, he would ruin
everything. Once again, he breathed in the scent of pears and sneezed.
“If you are
allergic to the trees, uncle, I can fix it. I know of this—”
Daedalus
struck out like a viper and shoved against Perdix’s chest.
The boy lost
his balance. He hit the balcony’s railing, and his arms flailed about like a
fish on land. “Uncle, help!”
He grabbed
his nephew’s legs and lifted. The slight movement unsettled Perdix, and he
tumbled over the edge. Daedalus waited for the thump that never occurred. What happened?
His fingers
clasped the railing as he leaned over. There was no sign of his nephew, no
broken body. Perdix had disappeared.
Below, a pear
tree branch shook without the wind’s aid. Seconds later, a partridge plopped
out from it and landed upon the ground. Ruffling its feathers, it pecked at the
earth.
5 comments:
I love this one! I like the 12 Days of Christmas theme. ^_^
I hadn't seen these from last year, so they're new to me. So did Perdix change into a partridge, or did he just fall into the tree and dislodge the bird?
A recently edited piece from a woman that is a professional editor.
I never saw this coming.
Nice link to the holidays. Way to go...
This is new to me too, and I loved it! What a great way to showcase the Greek myth (and, yes, I admit it, I had to look it up, as I hadn't heard of Perdix before). Very apt at Christmas :).
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