*Today's #fridayflash involves Jason "Jace" Matthews and his dad as they go out on Jace's first hunting trip. Hunting is a favorite pastime in the county Starred takes place. This is a pre-Starred memory from the love interest of Rose and Mary Beth.*
First Hunting Trip
Jace crouched in the tree stand besides his dad. A breeze
carried the scent of decaying leaves and reminded him of their walk through the
woods. Rough bark scratched through his coat as he adjusted his stance. His
eyes widened at the rifle at his dad’s side. He knew it was heavy in his eight-year-old
hands, but he’d been practicing with it at home. Dad even took him to a
shooting range, and he had a gun safety course.
He was ready.
Perhaps.
“Do you hear that?”
His dad’s breath tickled his ear, but he strained to listen.
At first, he heard nothing, but then there was a faint scuffling sound, like
someone brushing against leaves.
“What is it?” He winced at his voice. Was he too loud? Did
he scare them way?
Dad put a gloved finger against his lips before pointing
between some oak trees.
Jace turned and followed the tip of his finger. His eyes
widened at the three deer along the edge of the clearing. They stepped farther
into the forest, closer to them.
Dad nudged him, and when Jace looked at his dad, he smiled.
He offered the rifle to his son.
Jace eased it into his hands. It was heavy, but he lifted it
up so he could peer through the sight.
“Take your time, son. Make a clean kill or none at all. Just
like we practiced.” His words rumbled through him.
Anticipation gave him a tingling feeling, as if he had to
pee. He focused upon the deer’s body until everything lined up. Clean kill or
nothing at all. He didn’t want the animal to suffer. The weight in the rifle
seemed to triple as he fingered the trigger. Just right about there.
Boom!
The rifle shot echoed through the forest, hurt Jace’s ears. A
flock of birds took off from a nearby tree. The deer bounded away. One, two,
three. Uh, oh. He’d missed.
His shoulders sank as he passed the rifle back to his dad.
His dad’s arm slung around him and gave him a quick squeeze.
“You were a little high, but a great first shot. We’ll get ’em next time, okay?”
He peered into his dad’s face. Wrinkles crinkled around his
eyes. Smile crinkles, he liked to call them. He wasn’t mad or disappointed.
Jace started to smile too.
“Yeah, next time.”
Both happy to just be together, dad and son settled into the
tree stand and prepared for another long wait.
6 comments:
Very real rite-of-passage story. Well done!
This is a great passage, and made me want to read more about Jace and his dad. Both engaging characters. Great work!
Yay! I'm glad the deer didn't die. What a great ending!
I'm a softie, so I'm glad he missed too :-)
Nice scene. I like the smile crinkles. Those make me happy too.
Great little story. Some read father-son bonding right there...
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