tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post599891302397247209..comments2023-10-17T04:56:38.303-04:00Comments on Cherie Reich - Author: Friday Flash: Watching, WaitingCherie Reichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16663147386014122939noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-88279092521923175142013-01-13T23:16:08.790-05:002013-01-13T23:16:08.790-05:00very haunting indeed, a piece full of tender hopevery haunting indeed, a piece full of tender hopesjphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05772883091207430753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-31327982082090781762013-01-13T22:40:59.280-05:002013-01-13T22:40:59.280-05:00This really pulled me in. I would love to hear mor...This really pulled me in. I would love to hear more about what is happening with David.Chuck Allenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17363611239865782087noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-65913902649683863862013-01-13T18:55:59.888-05:002013-01-13T18:55:59.888-05:00I want to know more about David and their relation...I want to know more about David and their relationship as children. Great piece!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03060064276650474244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-42909033808642214192013-01-13T12:46:44.682-05:002013-01-13T12:46:44.682-05:00Such a bittersweet scene. Such a bittersweet scene. Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-78336103461991439382013-01-13T04:50:40.758-05:002013-01-13T04:50:40.758-05:00Very well written. Eager to read more.Very well written. Eager to read more.Rachna Chhabriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16900999965919504282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-53363785102956287732013-01-13T04:48:15.017-05:002013-01-13T04:48:15.017-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Rachna Chhabriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16900999965919504282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-28647858449465184662013-01-13T01:06:51.595-05:002013-01-13T01:06:51.595-05:00Well written. Eerie setting of the scene, sad, an...Well written. Eerie setting of the scene, sad, and you've already introduced this tension and secrets.<br /><br />Shannon at <a href="http://thewarriormuse.com/" rel="nofollow">The Warrior Muse</a>Shannon Lawrencehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00934641808195675935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-66469195585141345852013-01-12T12:38:50.490-05:002013-01-12T12:38:50.490-05:00Beautiful . . . I love how you keep building up th...Beautiful . . . I love how you keep building up the world of these characters, and really looking at the layers of humanity for each character, even David.Tyrean Martinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15356604721537744361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-19243964255936190402013-01-12T11:08:31.054-05:002013-01-12T11:08:31.054-05:00You definitely made me curious. Very intriguing! ...You definitely made me curious. Very intriguing! I want to know more and I read it twice. :)<br />~JessDMShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04202502753961748992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-55652660151997355642013-01-12T01:33:22.171-05:002013-01-12T01:33:22.171-05:00Very well written. It got my attention right off, ... Very well written. It got my attention right off, which doesn't happen often with me.Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04395502314886308773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-20932952141684780672013-01-12T00:49:17.329-05:002013-01-12T00:49:17.329-05:00The writing is lovely and the atmosphere very affe...The writing is lovely and the atmosphere very affective. I really enjoyed the vignette. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07735576044552810103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-57981640674597623472013-01-11T21:33:37.020-05:002013-01-11T21:33:37.020-05:00Ooh, I like! Twisted 3am thoughts. I really want t...Ooh, I like! Twisted 3am thoughts. I really want to know more about David.<br />I like your new look :)Carol Kilgorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03745686632918324803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-89440405616091790232013-01-11T19:12:45.562-05:002013-01-11T19:12:45.562-05:00Oh, really cool snippet! Does seem like this David...Oh, really cool snippet! Does seem like this David is a troubled soul, or something. Nice excerpt. :)Cathy Keatonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18356112948372149785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-79183916249339353092013-01-11T16:57:20.196-05:002013-01-11T16:57:20.196-05:00It is very lovely. I always love good atmosphere. ...It is very lovely. I always love good atmosphere. Now I'm curious as to all that's going on with David.M Paxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14096697282530998519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-24350440942004000752013-01-11T15:10:59.592-05:002013-01-11T15:10:59.592-05:00Ha! I stole LG's word and hadn't even read...Ha! I stole LG's word and hadn't even read the other comments. Great minds! :-DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00273059558675234923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-88163807645719903272013-01-11T15:10:00.567-05:002013-01-11T15:10:00.567-05:00So creepy and atmospheric! Just love it. :-)So creepy and atmospheric! Just love it. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00273059558675234923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-88983700136927888572013-01-11T13:59:43.770-05:002013-01-11T13:59:43.770-05:00Very atmospheric piece. A little Bronte-esque even...Very atmospheric piece. A little Bronte-esque even. Well done.Luanne G. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15762881276976395955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-60158960363237050152013-01-11T12:16:09.855-05:002013-01-11T12:16:09.855-05:00Beautiful writing! Beautiful writing! Rebecca Green Gasperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14487755367578898689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-54829343424881597162013-01-11T09:39:01.790-05:002013-01-11T09:39:01.790-05:00A great somber tone here. It makes me wonder if Da...A great somber tone here. It makes me wonder if David might be her husband, somehow. I'd definitely like to see more of this one.Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-75821044886229295142013-01-11T09:23:15.984-05:002013-01-11T09:23:15.984-05:00This was so haunting to read. I really loved that ...This was so haunting to read. I really loved that Freak Show story and the character of Gretchen. Interesting to catch up with her as an adult. Great job, Cherie!Julie Flandershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05003737491313673214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-11069350302070493532013-01-11T09:12:54.590-05:002013-01-11T09:12:54.590-05:00I like it. I want more too! I do wonder what sort ...I like it. I want more too! I do wonder what sort of life Gretchen would live after what happened.Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-90443445211436973362013-01-11T08:23:25.421-05:002013-01-11T08:23:25.421-05:00You really caught my interest with this piece. I w...You really caught my interest with this piece. I wanted to read more! :)Al Diazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08107619009321980764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8552707317670752823.post-37068299836336019872013-01-11T08:07:57.438-05:002013-01-11T08:07:57.438-05:00If only she could've helped David.If only she could've helped David.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com